I have successfully trimmed down and posted my story for the Archive. Huzzah.
I'd still like to see how Antihero slices it down. It'll be a good example for folks.
Meanwhile, I have a twofer to concoct to catch up with the calendar, an ankle to ice, and a lot of crimbo bikkies to help make vanish.
The diet is officially off until all the temptations go away.
Offski to go write two stories in a hurry.