I am talking to my shrink today. I hope to occupy myself with cover art progress during the day. Focus Friend save me. Save me Focus Friend.
...I am way too distractible with bright shiny objects.
Focus Friend is an app that helps me stop playing silly damn games on my phone all fucking day, FYI.
I shall be asking my conspirators online about chapter order. I think changing it soon so that Kosh's chapters are near Delias might be helpful. Pacing order is definitely going to be a thing with this rewrite. Where and when to flip shit around.
Right now the perspective order goes: Kosh, Crew, Delia, Flashback.
I'm thinking of going either: Kosh, Delia... or: Delia, Kosh... then Crew, Flashback.
That might happen after/for her first perspective chapter, which is also the introduction to Spitebane. Again, something to discuss so my audience knows these narratives are fucking tangled together.
Like they will know for Kosh and the crew. They might pick up the clues for the others. Finding out when all the pieces come together for various readers is part of my query process.
...when my fuckin beta readers get fuckin BACK to me [grouse grouse grumble grumble]
ANYway... I have a flash fiction to write, a Weird Writer Wednesday to draft, and a chapter to contemplate.
Away, away to rustling up some quality bullshit.